After my conference yesterday, I was able to fix my issue with the organization of my paper. Natalie gave me some great advice about how to deal with organization. She said to copy and paste each of my topic sentences from my paragraphs into a separate word document and then see if they all made sense and flowed nicely. It really helped me to be able to distinguish what ideas worked well together and places where I needed to change my flow of ideas. Also, to help with not sounding redundant in my paper, I found some specific examples that I can include in my argument.
Effective Websites:
http://www.ae.com/web/index.jsp
http://mormon.org/
http://www.apple.com/
http://www.bettycrocker.com/
Ineffective Websites:
http://www.nutrition.gov/
http://nccam.nih.gov/
http://mhs.d321.k12.id.us/
http://www.foxnews.com/
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