1. I will revise my introduction paragraph so I introduce the author and the audience earlier in my paper.
2. I need to condense some sentences or combine them in order to make my paper flow better.
3. I will fix my conclusion so that it doesn't start with "in conclusion." :)
I have a lot of favorite movies, but if I had to pick five they would be:
1. Wild Hearts Can't Be Broken
2. Pride & Prejudice
3. Elf
4. Ever After
5. Dan in Real Life
Elf is definately one of my favorite Christmas movies of all time! Dan in real life is really good too.
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